I want to
be immune.. to the thorns of viruses,
And have a
strong defense system,
I will never, ever be happy enough,
I will never, ever be happy enough,
If I catch
an allergy,
And if I can no longer carelessly play,
And if I can no longer carelessly play,
In the
next door’s garden.
No one survives life, I know,
No one survives life, I know,
I can
hear the voices in my head,
I can
hear the noises of the dead.
My
immunity does not grant me immortality,
But, I
cannot let my world fade to black from this reality.
Trees suffer my share of suffocation,
Trees suffer my share of suffocation,
The
network of germs is intriguing,
Slowly,
gripping my health,
Until
life becomes an infection,
These outsiders glance at my body in amazement,
At that which cannot be solved,
Puzzling enigmas,
How am I able to ward off,
The weakness, the sickness?
They stand strong every time you look their way.
These outsiders glance at my body in amazement,
At that which cannot be solved,
Puzzling enigmas,
How am I able to ward off,
The weakness, the sickness?
They stand strong every time you look their way.
Yet, away
from all the stress,
I have
a healthy diet,
I skip
the junk and stick to veggies,
The
best six doctors anywhere,
My
momma says..
And no one can deny it,
And no one can deny it,
Sunshine, water, rest, air, exercise and diet.
My
momma gives me Dabur Chyawan Junior,
Black
gold, by a brand so reliable,
My daily doctor, tasty and healthy,
The
natural immunity booster,
With
this gun, I fight the germs and infections,
Thus, maintaining
my body’s balance.
My
immune system is in place,
A network of body cells guarding me,
And protecting me,
A network of body cells guarding me,
And protecting me,
Never
letting me down,
Rising me with a ring of strength.
Rising me with a ring of strength.
I
celebrate life with Dabur,
It builds up my front,
Where I come across as unbreakable,
Standing tall, untouched by the harmful,
It builds up my front,
Where I come across as unbreakable,
Standing tall, untouched by the harmful,
Taking the defense when they look my way,
Hiding my weakness and vulnerability,
Hiding my weakness and vulnerability,
Not
allowing them to see me crack under pressure.
Being
immune to the pain,
Giving
the germs’ hits a miss!
Telling them,
Telling them,
Why
expend your energy trying to break me?
My immune system is still intact,
For my safe-keeping,
Protecting my innocence from the virus attack!
My immune system is still intact,
For my safe-keeping,
Protecting my innocence from the virus attack!
Whoa girl.. thats beautiful .. Best Of Luck girl :D
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