Saturday, 4 January 2014

Haiku #3 ~ Clap

“Dancing leaves clap in unity,
All in vain,
Down by winter’s blade!”


This post is a part of Ultimate Blogging Challenge ~ Day 5!
For Haiku Heights #316 - Clap 

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29 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood4 January 2014 at 23:47

    A perfect haiku... 17... good ..I liked the thought very much.....and perhaps my first visit to your page..is it so? Hope you will reciprocate..the visit..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/01/clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-haiku.html

    RS:)

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  2. Ramesh Sood5 January 2014 at 00:52

    Aayesha, do visit again to see the "real" haiku I have created...for the post.. yes, did some editing after your visit..

    RS

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  3. Englepappa/ Ole JN5 January 2014 at 01:21

    It's better to have... clapped... and lost, than never to have clapped... Nice haiku!

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  4. Unknown5 January 2014 at 02:48

    Gr8 ... Work .. Now i understand haiku ..

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  5. Anonymous5 January 2014 at 05:15

    nicely written haiku.you also have a nice blog.

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  6. Richa Singh5 January 2014 at 06:41

    The imagery attached it perfect! I could picture it..

    Richa

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  7. Milan Rajkumar5 January 2014 at 14:29

    beautiful !

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  8. Unknown5 January 2014 at 19:36

    How poignant! I could picture it..your words were so vivid! ♥

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  9. kalpana solsi6 January 2014 at 00:21

    The dancing leaves's claps will never go in vain. beautiful haiku.

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  10. Anmol Rawat6 January 2014 at 01:02

    lovely haiku and perfect picture :)

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  11. Unknown6 January 2014 at 04:11

    lovely!! :)

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  12. Reshma6 January 2014 at 18:15

    Your words have woven a beautiful imagery.

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  13. Lmkazmierczak7 January 2014 at 01:20

    "Winter's blade'...great phrase♪ Am getting felled by it here in Chicagoland! Still, Happy2014! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/

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  14. Locomente7 January 2014 at 22:32

    Oh... so lovely...
    Blends with the mood of the current season..

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  15. Anonymous10 January 2014 at 11:40

    Very nice seasonal haiku.

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