Dr. Rathod and Dr. Kumar could literally give people another
chance to live!
They created a technology that allowed them to
weave artificial memories, such that a patient could request attempts to alter
their mind and wake up with memories of things that did not actually happen.
However, since these new memories are permanent, the
conflict between them and the existing authentic memories clash in such a way
that it ceases the person’s ability to properly function.
Thus, the operation could only be done to people on their
deathbeds, to fulfill what they wish they had done with their lives… but
did not.
With each step back in time, a new fragment of Salonee’s curious
past is revealed. And as the two doctors piece together the puzzled events that
spanned a life time of a last stage Cancer patient, Salonee, they find out her dying wish ~ to go to the moon, since she always wanted to be an
astronaut.
This post is written for 5 sentence fiction, the prompt being 'MOON'.
For more details: http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-ficiton-moon/
Also, day 10 ~ Ultimate Blogging Challenge! :D
An interesting futuristic plot. And with one way mars already in place perhaps this would not be far!
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thank you so much Anmol :D
DeleteThis is a very interesting and beautiful piece. I was wondering how the theme of a moon would fit in there. Excellent creative work!
ReplyDeleteKeep on writing
yes, the prompt came in the last line!
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Very nice one, Aayesha :) I love the Moon too.
ReplyDeleteyay Anita! :D
DeleteMoon...I have this very weird habit of saying "GOODNIGHT MOON" before I sleep!!
ReplyDeleteexcellent work!!
hehe. It isn't weird! you're just aware of the natural beauty around ;)
DeleteNice one
ReplyDeletethank you Ali :)
DeleteA vision from future!
ReplyDeleteyeah Indrani :)
DeleteI am craving for more.. I wish your post was a bit more longer.. Very interesting :)
ReplyDeleteAw! That's so sweet of you Sonia! Wish, I could write more too :D
DeleteI love how you incorporated the prompt into this post. Interesting idea about future potential, and going to the moon is always such a magical idea :-)
ReplyDeletedelighted that you liked it :)
Deleteindeed futuristic.. cool write up. :)
ReplyDeletethank you :)
Deleteglad you liked it!
This is beautiful. Such a lovely thought too, to have what you wished for to finally come 'true' at the very end, making for a life worth lived. Very clever. xxx
ReplyDeletethank you Lizzie :)
Deleteyes! that would make life so much worthy, if it could happen! :)