Friday 17 January 2014

Little Did She Know ~ 55 Words

‘I believe anyone who is unbelievably good is unreal. Good guys are real guys, with all their follies, who forget to wish you on special days, but are always there to pick up the broken pieces when you most need them, like you Sahil.’ Alia said. 

 Little did she know, her best friend loved her to madness!


This post is for Write Tribe prompt – 55 fiction – ‘Little did she know.’
For more details: http://writetribe.com/55-friday-2014-1/
Also, day 17 at Ultimate Blogging Challenge.
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24 comments:

  1. Nabanita17 January 2014 at 23:31

    I agree! and a wonderful one :)

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  2. kalpana solsi17 January 2014 at 23:34

    Love is very strange. One person chases it and is not able to experience and the other is unaware of some-one loving .

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  3. Anonymous18 January 2014 at 01:05

    Brilliant one, Aayesha. Sometimes, we don't value the ones who love us dearly and we lament once they are gone. Superb lines and love the way u started the story:)

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  4. Unknown18 January 2014 at 04:09

    Aayesha, you have penned a very emotional 55er.

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  5. Namrota18 January 2014 at 04:37

    Loved it dear...<3

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  6. bookworm18 January 2014 at 06:33

    Well written.

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  7. Karan Shah18 January 2014 at 07:47

    we keep running after the people who least care about us. Why don't we just stop, turn around and see those who are running behind us? - I am doing that now - that's my resolution this year and your prompt says it all :)

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    1. Aayesha S Hakim18 January 2014 at 20:58

      Oh, nice resolution, Karan!
      That's right! We never turn and look back! :(

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  8. Rafaa Dalvi19 January 2014 at 00:00

    Well done Aayesha

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  9. Prasanna Rao19 January 2014 at 01:55

    That's so true, there are no perfect men (except maybe Bradley Cooper :) ) but what makes a perfect man are those imperfect habits which irritate you but you still miss them when they are not around :)

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    1. Aayesha S Hakim20 January 2014 at 05:16

      Prasanna :P
      Yes, those imperfect, irritating habits that don't let you hate him ;)

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  10. Amrita Sabat19 January 2014 at 04:28

    Wow...so true...the exceptionally good guys have to be unreal...it's d gal who sees the ordinary as the 'extra-ordinary' (probably tujhme rab dikhta hai types!) n d romance grows....:)

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  11. Shilpa Garg19 January 2014 at 06:31

    Oh! Hope she realizes it soon! Good 55er!

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  12. Unknown21 January 2014 at 01:47

    Poor Sahil. You can probably do a couple of follow up 55ers and develop it into a story. Would love to see where this goes! Well written :)

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