‘I
believe anyone who is unbelievably good is unreal. Good guys are real guys, with
all their follies, who forget to wish you on special days, but are always there
to pick up the broken pieces when you most need them, like you Sahil.’ Alia said.
Little did she know, her best friend loved her to madness!
Little did she know, her best friend loved her to madness!
This post is for Write Tribe prompt – 55 fiction – ‘Little did she know.’
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I agree! and a wonderful one :)
ReplyDeletethank you Naba :)
DeleteLove is very strange. One person chases it and is not able to experience and the other is unaware of some-one loving .
ReplyDeleteso well said Kalpana!
Deletesad, but true! :)
Brilliant one, Aayesha. Sometimes, we don't value the ones who love us dearly and we lament once they are gone. Superb lines and love the way u started the story:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal :)
DeleteWell said! :)
Aayesha, you have penned a very emotional 55er.
ReplyDeletethank you Ma'am :)
DeleteLoved it dear...<3
ReplyDeletethank you Namrota :)
DeleteWell written.
ReplyDeletethank you :)
Deletewe keep running after the people who least care about us. Why don't we just stop, turn around and see those who are running behind us? - I am doing that now - that's my resolution this year and your prompt says it all :)
ReplyDeleteOh, nice resolution, Karan!
DeleteThat's right! We never turn and look back! :(
Well done Aayesha
ReplyDeletethank you Rafaa :)
DeleteThat's so true, there are no perfect men (except maybe Bradley Cooper :) ) but what makes a perfect man are those imperfect habits which irritate you but you still miss them when they are not around :)
ReplyDeletePrasanna :P
DeleteYes, those imperfect, irritating habits that don't let you hate him ;)
Wow...so true...the exceptionally good guys have to be unreal...it's d gal who sees the ordinary as the 'extra-ordinary' (probably tujhme rab dikhta hai types!) n d romance grows....:)
ReplyDeletetrue! ;)
Deletehehe, that's a lovely song, Amrita :)
Oh! Hope she realizes it soon! Good 55er!
ReplyDelete:P :)
Deletethank you Shilpa!
Poor Sahil. You can probably do a couple of follow up 55ers and develop it into a story. Would love to see where this goes! Well written :)
ReplyDeleteWill surely give it a thought! :)
Deletethank you :)