Infinite questions
come to my mind…
Which answer is reliable?
I look at you, I observe you carefully; my soul and mind join together to answer me in some way…
In you, I see a tender, sweet yet a fearless and a passionate woman, branded by the fire of the harshness of life!
Forming a shield, an impenetrable castle, but I know that behind all of this, there is an unimaginable woman, who is hell-bent fearless!
Which answer is reliable?
I look at you, I observe you carefully; my soul and mind join together to answer me in some way…
In you, I see a tender, sweet yet a fearless and a passionate woman, branded by the fire of the harshness of life!
Forming a shield, an impenetrable castle, but I know that behind all of this, there is an unimaginable woman, who is hell-bent fearless!
Also, day 16 at Ultimate Blogging Challenge.
P.S: This post is also for http://lilliemcferrin.com/five-sentence-fiction-fearless/
beautiful and poignant!
ReplyDeletethank you Naba :)
DeleteFANTASTIC!!! :) :) :)
ReplyDelete- Rahul
thank you Rahul :)
DeleteThat was beautiful! :)
ReplyDeletethank you Sheethal :)
DeleteNaari shakti... :)
ReplyDeleteyep, woman power :D
DeleteLovely <3
ReplyDeleteRicha
thank you Richa! :)
Deleteshort and beautiful.. :)
ReplyDeletethank you :)
Deleteglad you liked it!
Lovely...short and poignant.
ReplyDeletethank you Preethi :)
Deletelovely!! I felt good !
ReplyDelete:) I felt good, after reading your comment ;)
DeleteThat's beautiful...resonates with so many women!
ReplyDeleteyeah!
Deletethanks for reading :)
This is a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I will pass this around! Peace.
ReplyDeletethank you Jeanne :)
Deleteaw! :) I'm honored!
Strong and swiftly to the point.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words! :)
DeleteSuch a role model. And how lucky is the narrator that she gets to see and experience this monument of a woman. ;-)
ReplyDeleteMy Fearless entry.
DeleteReally, Magaly! When you observe around carefully, you experience magic sometimes! :)
DeleteNice one, Liked it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ruchi! :)
DeleteShort, sweet, beautiful and poignant :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Anmol! :)
DeleteFearless woman! may we have more like her!
ReplyDeleteAmen! :)
DeleteLovely - I would be so happy if someone wrote or said something like that about me!
ReplyDeleteAw! After reading your thought on this, I feel the same now! :)
DeleteNice one Mam..!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sankeerth! :)
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