Thursday 17 July 2014

Five Sentence Fiction: You're My Snowstorm!


I don't even know when you became so important to me - it was like watching a snowstorm!

You see the flakes falling, but you don't realize how they are adding up!

Then suddenly your entire lawn is covered.

Many little things have added up!

You're not my rain, you're my snow storm!


P.S: This week’s Five Sentence Fiction is based on Lillie McFerrin’s prompt word: Rain.


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31 comments:

  1. Jaded Rebel17 July 2014 at 22:43

    aha!! thats really sweet nd heart warming :D

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  2. elly stornebrink18 July 2014 at 00:40

    <3 it! It's so poetic! :) <3

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    1. Aayesha S Hakim18 July 2014 at 00:42

      Glad to know you loved it, Elly! Keep coming back!

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  3. Anonymous18 July 2014 at 01:38

    Aayesha, this is so beautiful, magical and romantic. Love every words describing the beauty of life and love:)

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    1. Aayesha S Hakim18 July 2014 at 01:43

      Thank you so much, Vishal for your kind words! :)

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  4. Rahul Ashok18 July 2014 at 06:31

    Fantastic! :D

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  5. Ranu 80218 July 2014 at 06:36

    Hi Aayesha I loved your story.

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  6. Aathira18 July 2014 at 13:31

    So much of romance and beauty in this one, Aayesha!

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  7. Red Handed18 July 2014 at 22:45

    Ah..this one made me smile. :)

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  8. Tina Basu19 July 2014 at 05:56

    very nice
    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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  9. Anonymous19 July 2014 at 16:03

    Ah, the beauty of burgeoning love, and the brilliance of nature to describe it so beautifully.

    http://www.thejadedlens.com/2014/07/19/abrupt/

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  10. Unknown20 July 2014 at 04:37

    Lovely!

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  11. Unknown20 July 2014 at 13:39

    That's a fantastic way to describe the process of developing a relationship with someone!

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  12. Shailaja V20 July 2014 at 23:09

    Good thing you put a positive spin on Snowstorm :D Liked the exposition here.

    Shailaja/The Moving Quill

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    1. Aayesha S Hakim22 July 2014 at 09:26

      Yeah! Unlike when people mostly highlight the negativity of a snowstorm ;)
      Thanks for visiting :)

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  13. Anita Sabat22 July 2014 at 23:09

    Rain is magnified 7 what a snow storm! may everyone get to experience one safely, Aayesha :)

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  14. Magaly Guerrero25 July 2014 at 12:30

    Ah, all those little gestures we nearly take for granted, but that end up showing us that we can't live without the ones who makes them possible.

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  15. Jyotsna Bhatia26 July 2014 at 10:00

    Beautiful take on the prompt on Aayesha. :)

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