I
don't even know when you became so important to me - it was like watching a
snowstorm!
You
see the flakes falling, but you don't realize how they are adding up!
Then
suddenly your entire lawn is covered.
Many
little things have added up!
You're
not my rain, you're my snow storm!
P.S: This week’s Five Sentence
Fiction is based on Lillie McFerrin’s prompt word: Rain.
aha!! thats really sweet nd heart warming :D
ReplyDeleteThanks, Juhi :)
Delete<3 it! It's so poetic! :) <3
ReplyDeleteGlad to know you loved it, Elly! Keep coming back!
DeleteAayesha, this is so beautiful, magical and romantic. Love every words describing the beauty of life and love:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Vishal for your kind words! :)
DeleteFantastic! :D
ReplyDeleteHey, Rahul! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteHi Aayesha I loved your story.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ranu! :)
DeleteSo much of romance and beauty in this one, Aayesha!
ReplyDeleteThank you, A! :)
DeleteAh..this one made me smile. :)
ReplyDeleteSo happy to know that, Red! :D
Deletevery nice
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Thank you Tina :)
DeleteAh, the beauty of burgeoning love, and the brilliance of nature to describe it so beautifully.
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DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Freya! :)
DeleteThat's a fantastic way to describe the process of developing a relationship with someone!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jennifer :)
DeleteGood thing you put a positive spin on Snowstorm :D Liked the exposition here.
ReplyDeleteShailaja/The Moving Quill
Yeah! Unlike when people mostly highlight the negativity of a snowstorm ;)
DeleteThanks for visiting :)
Rain is magnified 7 what a snow storm! may everyone get to experience one safely, Aayesha :)
ReplyDeleteType- *&* & not 7 :)
DeleteAmen, Anita :)
DeleteAh, all those little gestures we nearly take for granted, but that end up showing us that we can't live without the ones who makes them possible.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, Magaly! :)
DeleteBeautiful take on the prompt on Aayesha. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jyotsna!! :)
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